viernes, 14 de octubre de 2016

The divorce

Many people think that divorce is good because it is an easy way to break out with someone. Studies show that the 40% of the couples are divorced, the other 20% are a happy couple, and the other 20% there are bad behaviour between them.
In my opinion many of the couples that are divorced are teenagers. This is because they want to get married very early and some of them want to have babies. Personally, I think that it is better to take your time and choose the correct person.
On the other hand, there are couples that have a bad behaviour. Normally, it is the man who hurts the woman but, sometimes they just have a lot of arguments between them. This situacions are difficult, especially for children because they don't understand why they are angry and sometimes think that is their fault.
To sum up, I personally think that divorce is good if you don't love the other person or if you think that there are bad behaviour between their. Although people who are divorced say that there is a lot of time, maybe you will find your true love.

1 comentario:

  1. Good exposition of ideas and good structure.

    Be careful with:

    "the other 20%" = "in the other 20%" (l.1)

    "there are bad behavior" = "there is bad behavior" (l.3)

    "This situations are difficult" = "These situations are difficult" (l.9)

    "between their" = "between them" (.12)

    Grade:8,25

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